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You see the monk stroll by,
Hands held together in soft whispered prayer.
He is lost amongst the busy body marketplace.
He is the contradictory of his surroundings;
calm, serene, tranquil.
His bald head held high,
With a giving smile spread across his face.
His orange robes fall creasedupon his lithe form.
The wrinkles at his eyes
tells the wisdom they percieve.
With every blink and every bow of his head,
his knowledge broadens.
His cunning eyes see all;
the helpful child on the street;
the rushing business men;
and the burdened mothers.
Beyond the people; the market place,
he sees cherry blossoms and
a thread of water spilling between rocks
to pool at a great willow tree.
He sees Buddha beckoning him.
To sit him and share the serenity together.
You see the monk stroll by,
with his eyes in the clouds and his feet on the ground.
©2008-2009 ~AtomicFlower
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Author's Comments

I wrote this FOREVER ago.
I have no idea why, or how it came to be but whatever, might as well put something up right?
I know close to nothing about monks, or Buddha, so keep the commons back. it was just a random thing that came to me.


© Natalie Poirier

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I read this forever ago and reading it still now leaves me speechless..

I love this so much, I don't feel worthy of commenting... XO

It's like: Man! This is so good! It makes me feel like... like... like something really out of the ordinary and euphoric but I can't find the right words to express it. Since I fail at the English and I don't know how to put it into words.

Much like right now.

/praise

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I wish I had Raistlin Majere's boxers.
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hey, sorry for late reply (i've been gone for 6 weeks), but thanks for the comments! Much appreciated!

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Oh ya btw, this is Brandon.
Yes, I have DA, and I'm still not sure why.

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